[答案]
DearJohn,
IamsorrytohearthatyouaresufferingfromTikTokaddiction.Actually,itiscommonlyseenthatmoreandmoreteenagersgetcrazyaboutTikTokandspendalotoftimewatchingandsharingvideosonline,whichmakesthemunabletofocusonstudy.
Therefore,immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopit.Youshouldstartsomeotherhobbies,suchasreading,listeningtomusicorplayingchess.Besides,youhadbettermakemorefriendsthroughfacetofacecommunication.
Isincerelyhopethattheseideascanhelpyouwiththeproblem.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
[解析]
Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.【高分句型一】Actually,it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online,which makes them unable to focus on study.【高分句型二】(表示理解和关心,并且说明沉迷抖音的影响)
Therefore,immediate measures should be taken to stop it.You should start some other hobbies,such as reading,listening to music or playing chess.Besides,you had better make more friends through face to face communication.(提出具体建议)
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.(表达希望)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
[点评]
本题考查了"提纲作文,",属于"基础题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。