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A happy moment withmyfriends
IwenttothezoowithmyfriendslastSunday.Itwashotandsunnythatday.Ittookusabouttwohourstogettherebybus.Therewerethousandsofpeopleinthezoo.Wesawlotsofanimals,suchas,pandas,kangaroos,polarbears,giraffes,elephants,tigers,wolves,snakesandsoon.Wealsosawtheelephantshow.Theelephantsweresocleverthattheycoulddolotsofthingslikeus.Atnoonwehadapicnicinthezoo.Andthenwethrewtherubbishintothedustbin.Wedidn'tgohomeuntil5:00intheafternoon.Althoughweweretired,welearntmanyanimals,sowefelthappy.
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A happy moment with my friends
I went to the zoo with my friends last Sunday.It was hot and sunny that day.【高分句型一】It took us about two hours to get there by bus.There were thousands of people in the zoo.We saw lots of animals,such as,pandas,kangaroos,polar bears,giraffes,elephants,tigers,wolves,snakes and so on.We also saw the elephant show.The elephants were so clever that they could do lots of things like us.At noon we had a picnic in the zoo.And then we threw the rubbish into the dustbin.【高分句型二】We didn't go home until 5:00 in the afternoon.Although we were tired,we learnt many animals,so we felt happy.