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Myfavoritetoy
Ihavemanytoys,suchastoydogs,toyplanesandsoon.Butmyfavoriteisateddybear.WhenIstartedprimaryschoolattheageof8,mymotherboughtme theteddybearasagifttoencouragemetostudy.Itdeeplyaffectedme.Mybearhaslovelypinkskinandlovelywhitebelly.Herarmsarealittleshort.Herhairissosoftthateveryonewantstotouchit.Shehasbigblackandfriendlyeyes;Theyareasbigasdates,asblackassesame,andasfriendlyasmymother's.Hercheekswereredandwhite,andhermouthseemedtospeakthesweetestwordsintheworld.
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My favorite toy
I have many toys,such as toy dogs,toy planes and so on.【高分句型一】But my favorite is a teddy bear.When I started primary school at the age of 8,my mother bought me the teddy bear as a gift to encourage me to study.It deeply affected me.My bear has lovely pink skin and lovely white belly.Her arms are a little short.Her hair is so soft that everyone wants to touch it.【高分句型二】She has big black and friendly eyes;They are as big as dates,as black as sesame,and as friendly as my mother's.Her cheeks were red and white,and her mouth seemed to speak the sweetest words in the world.