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DearTom，
LastWednesday，ItookpartintheComing﹣of﹣AgeCeremonyinourschool，whichwasquiteameaningfuloccasioninmylife.Formallydressed，wegatheredattheschoolauditoriumat2pm，waitingforthegreatmomenttocome.Onthestagesatourbelovedteachersandsomeparents.
Atthebeginning，ourpresidentandaparentdeliveredtoustheircongratulationsandbestwishes.Thentwostudents，representingus，expressedourgratitudeanddeterminationtotakeonresponsibilities.Themostmovingmomentcamewhenweweregiventhelettersfromparents.TearsrolleddownmyfaceasIread，recallingeachmemorablemomentinmylifeandfeelingtheever﹣lastinglovefrommyparents.Attheendoftheceremony，allofuspromisedtotryourbesttocontributetooursociety.TheComing﹣of﹣Ageceremony，forme，ismorethanaceremony；itisaninstructivelesson.
DoyouhavesimilareventsintheUSA？Lookingforwardtoyourletter.
Yours，
LiHua
[解析]
Dear Tom，
Last Wednesday，I took part in the Coming﹣of﹣Age Ceremony in our school，which was quite a meaningful occasion in my life.Formally dressed，we gathered at the school auditorium at 2 pm，waiting for the great moment to come.On the stage sat our beloved teachers and some parents.（点明时间，地点，人员和事件）
At the beginning，our president and a parent delivered to us their congratulations and best wishes.Then two students，representing us，expressed our gratitude and determination to take on responsibilities.【高分句型一】The most moving moment came when we were given the letters from parents.Tears rolled down my face as I read，recalling each memorable moment in my life and feeling the ever﹣lasting love from my parents.【高分句型二】At the end of the ceremony，all of us promised to try our best to contribute to our society.The Coming﹣of﹣Age ceremony，for me，is more than a ceremony；it is an instructive lesson.（介绍活动过程）
Do you have similar events in the USA？Looking forward to your letter.（期盼回信）
Yours，
Li Hua
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本题考查了"图画作文，"，属于"基础题"，熟悉题型是解题的关键。
根据图画内容，以"We Want Our School Bags Lighter"为题，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文．
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