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DearSir/Madam,
TheInternethastransformedtheworldintoaglobalvillage,alteringallaspectsofourlife,especiallyeducation.So,Iamwritingtosharemyopinionsonitseffects.
Themostobviousadvantageisthewidechoiceofcourses.Learnerscanhaveaccesstothecoursestailoredforpersonalneedsregardlessoftimeandspace.Asaresult,learningoccursinsuchanefficientwaythatgainingknowledgeiseasierthanever.However,thedownsideisjustasnoticeable.Alongwithindividualizedcourses,theInternetpresentshalf﹣truthsthatpuzzletheyoungmindswhereself﹣controlandjudgingpowerarestillforming.
Therefore,Istronglysuggestthattheuseoftheinternetshouldbeundersupervisionofadults.Andparentsandteachersshouldprovideguidancetoensurethatitbestservesthementalandphysicalgrowthoftheteens.
Yours,
LiHua
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Dear Sir/Madam,
The Internet has transformed the world into a global village,altering all aspects of our life,especially education.So,I am writing to share my opinions on its effects.(点明主题)
The most obvious advantage is the wide choice of courses.Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs regardless of time and space.As a result,learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easier than ever.【高分句型一】(有利影响)However,the downside is just as noticeable.Along with individualized courses,the Internet presents half﹣truths that puzzle the young minds where self﹣control and judging power are still forming.(不利影响)
Therefore,I strongly suggest that the use of the internet should be under supervision of adults.【高分句型二】And parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure that it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens.(个人观点)
Yours,
Li Hua
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本题考查了"书信类,提纲作文,",属于"易错题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。