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21415. (2020•高新一中•二模) 毕业之际,学校要求每位九年级的学生给各自家长写一封信,简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。假如你是Jim,请根据下表的提示,用英文做一个简短的汇报.
收获: (1)学到很多知识…
(2)学会了与人相处:在学校…,在家…
(3)遇到困难时…
存在问题 学习压力…
目前想法 感谢…
要求:
(1)参考表格中的内容,可适当发挥;
(2)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯,书写工整;
(3)文章不得出现真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数:不少于70词(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Dad & Mom,
    I'll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
共享时间:2020-06-01 难度:4
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[答案]
DearDad&Mom,I'llleavejuniorschoolsoonandmeetanewchallengeofmylife.NowIwouldliketotellyouwhatIhavedoneinthepastthreeyears.Duringthisthree-yearperiod,Ihavegainedalot.Ihavelearnedrichknowledgeandalsolearnedhowtogetalongwellwithotherpeople.Atschool,Iwashard-workingandkindtomyclassmatessoImademanygoodfriends.Iwasalsopolitetoteachersandanybodyaroundme.Athome,Ilearnedhowtolookaftermylittlesistersandhelpedwithhousework.Moreover,facingdifferentdifficultiesshowninmylife,Iwascalmandbrave.Ialsotriedmybesttohandlethem.However,Ihadsomeproblems,too.Thepressurecamefrommystudymademefeelnervousandstressedout.IthinkIshouldfindsomewaystorelax.Now,Iwanttoappreciateyouandeveryonewhohelpedmeduringthistime.IhopeIwillhaveanewandhappierlife.                                                                                                        Yourssincerely,                                                                                                                         LiLei
[解析]
Dear Dad & Mom,
I'll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.During this three-year period, I have gained a lot. I have learned rich knowledge and also learned how to get along well with other people. 【高分句型一】At school, I was hard-working and kind to my classmates so I made many good friends.  I was also polite to teachers and anybody around me. At home, I learned how to look after my little sisters and helped with housework. Moreover, facing  different difficulties shown in my life, I was calm and brave. I also tried my best to deal with  them.【高分句型二】However, I had some problems, too. The pressure came from my study made me feel nervous and stressed out. I think I should find some ways to relax.  Now, I want to appreciate you and everyone who helped me during this time. I hope I will have a new and happier life.
                                                                                                             Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                              Li Lei
[点评]
首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
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