[解析]
I have planned an autumn outing for my class next week，and I'm writing to ask∧your permission．
First，the place where we've decided to visit﹣the Forest Park is not far away from the city．We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there．Second，the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get close to the nature．Third，we need to spare some time to take some physical exercises．Some teachers as well as Mr Wang is going to join us to make sure of our safe．
We are all looking forward to receive your permission．We will appreciate you if you can kindly give us an
immediate reply．
详解：
1．加for 考查词语用法．ask for意为"请求…，要求…"，是固定搭配．
2．where改为which/that 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词place作visit的宾语，用关系代词which/that．
3．and改为or 考查连词．take a bus和ride a bike之间是选择关系，而非并列关系，用连词or．
4．would改为will 考查时态．根据前文提到的next week，要用一般将来时态．
5．去掉the 考查冠词．nature的基本意思是"大自然，自然界"，包含各种生物及山脉、河流等一切自然世界，宇宙万物，并包含一切自然过程，是不可数名词，其前不能加定冠词．
6．exercises改为exercise 考查名词．此处exercise意为"锻炼"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
7．is改为are 考查主谓一致．此处as well as连接两个主语，后面的谓语动词和第一个主语Some teachers保持一致，用复数are．
8．safe改为safety 考查名词．形容词性物主代词修饰名词，形容词safe的名词是safety．
9．receive改为receiving 考查动名词．to是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
10．you改为it 考查固定句型．句型…appreciate it if…意为"…不胜感激"，是一个固定句型．
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