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DearSirorMadam,
I'mwritinginthehopethat1canoabtainachancetofurthermystudyincomputerscienceinyouruniversity.
First,pleaseallowmetomakeabriefintroductionofmyself.I'mLiHua,agirlborminJune,2005.I'mgradu﹣atingfromXi'anTaoliHighSchoolthiscomingJunewitheachcourseexellent.1haveakeeninterestincomputersandtheInternet.Besides,I'mgoodatEnglish.IknowthattheUniversityofColumbiaranksamongthethemostfamousuniversitiesintheUSA,andthat'stheveryreasonwhyI'mnowapplyingtofurthermyuniversitystudyinyourComputerScienceDepartment.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletoprovidemewithsomeinformationandsendmethenecessasryaplicationmaterials.Bytheway,myemailaddressislihua98@sina.com.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing in the hope that 1 can oabtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university.(点明主题)
First,please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself.I'm Li Hua,a girl borm in June,2005.I'm gradu﹣ating from Xi'an Taoli High School this coming June with each course exellent.1 have a keen interest in computers and the Internet.Besides,I'm good at English.I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the the most famous universities in the USA,and that's the very reason why I'm now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department.【高分句型一】I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessasry aplication materials.【高分句型二】By the way,my email address is lihua 98@ sina.com.(具体介绍个人信息)
Looking forward to your reply.(期待回复)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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本题考查了"提纲作文,兴趣爱好,",属于"易错题",熟悉题型是解题的关键。